http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/-t1.htm In general, this is anything about writing that doesn't fit into the other boards.(1 sub-board) Fri, 19 Jun 2009 18:06:55 GMT 10 http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/4160/ilogocopy.png http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/-t1.htm http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/fights-t296.htm Anonymous 1. You might have to reconsider Kia's tactics... Honestly, someone who is 5'3" probably won't try to punch somebody who is 6'3" in the face. Why not go for the kidneys? 2. If her back is against his front, he won't be able to punch her in the back. It's just not a good option at this point. A hand around the throat is a favorite, or perhaps grabbing her by her hair and yanking her head back. 3. I like it. When writing fighting scenes, there are a few things to keep ... General Writing Fri, 19 Jun 2009 18:06:55 GMT http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/fights-t296.htm#2546 http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/fights-t296.htm http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/favorite-lines-you-ve-written-t53.htm KRDevemis

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He imagined what the labyrinth looked like with its many twists and turns and creatures that killed for pleasure. A woman’s mind during PMS, he mused.

Oh, Moddren. You funny man.]]> General Writing Mon, 09 Mar 2009 18:48:35 GMT http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/favorite-lines-you-ve-written-t53.htm#211 http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/favorite-lines-you-ve-written-t53.htm http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/writing-excuses-podcast-t177.htm J.H. Wolf(star) www.writingexcuses.com or seek it out on iTunes or the like. The authors typically deal with Sci-Fi/Fantasy specifically, but the craft aspects of writing they discuss, such as characterization or plotting are useful across the board, in my opinion.]]> General Writing Tue, 14 Apr 2009 01:25:14 GMT http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/writing-excuses-podcast-t177.htm#1348 http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/writing-excuses-podcast-t177.htm http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/ugh-help-with-chapter-two-t79.htm KRDevemis Okay, well for those who've read my full chapter one to Demon Labyrinth, instead of just the first half, you'll know that Kacey found where the demon is hiding. Or trapped. She doesn't know it's trapped just yet. Whatever. I can't write chapter two. I'll think about it so much and have a good idea on how everything will go but...I don't write it. I think it's the fact that Kacey has to get ready to go down in the basement AKA Moddren's guest room. She's naked right now, for crying out ... General Writing Tue, 17 Mar 2009 16:35:34 GMT http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/ugh-help-with-chapter-two-t79.htm#422 http://ureviews.forumotion.com/general-writing-f24/ugh-help-with-chapter-two-t79.htm